Welcome to the league

[helloimmred]

Welcome to the league somewhere, someplace that pits together very odd combinations of fights. These fights are often very brutal and sometimes deadly. But what seperates this league from others is the types of matches. All the matches held in the league have very close inerpersonal relationships. For instance it isn't strange to see a man and wife brutally fight in the league. Brothers fight sisters, boyfriends fight girlfriends, twin sisters fight each other, and so on and so on. The interpersonal matches are endless. Another thing that sets this league apart is that the audience, who are always close friends and family of the combatants in the ring may participate in the fight, even though it is a very limited role. You see, inside the league building, drugs like methanfedimes are pumped through the ventilators to keep everyone in the upmost state of desire and blurs all sorts of normal judgement that they might have previously had. The only other small differences is that there is one corner-pole that is made of shiny chrome steel that has no padding. Also there is no ref, and these matches go until the opponent and the audience is satisfied.


So here are the sttings. Please email me ideas for combatents if you're interested. I'll start with the stories very soon.

[dirksken]

hi,nice idea!!
I want to setup my mom and aunt in a tag team catfight against my aunts 2 daughters. My mom 55 years old is 5'2, brown short hair and 32B bra and weights 143lbs, she got a little belly and big hips, my aunt is 50 years old is 5'5, brown short hair weights 120lbs and has bra size 34B. my moms name is Marie and my aunts name is Ann, both never had a fight.
My aunts daughters are Ilse and Hilde.
Hilde is 24, 5'5 long black hair, big boobs 32D weights 165lbs.
the other daughter Ilse is 22 also 5'5 has 34C boobs and weight 135lbs and got long blond hair.

[Mr Magic]

Great idea! I'd like to see my sister vs wife:

Wife is 26, 5'3", 140 pounds, 36DD chest, brown hair. Little thick, big curves!
Sister is 31, 5'5", 125 or so, C chest, black hair. Thinner and slimmer.

[helloimmred]

Oh that's good one magic. I'll work on it right after i finish the one i'm writing now about a father/son vs mother/daughter (it's almost finished)

[johnsmith2007]

Father/Son vs Mother/Daughter sounds great, cant wait. I was going to suggest Husband Vs Wife, but your idea is even better,
John

[dirksken]

hi dirky, i have another suggestion, if you have the time can you write a story about my aunt and mom fighting eachother? there stats are :
My mom 55 years old is 5'2, brown short hair and 32B bra and weights 143lbs, she got a little belly and big hips, my aunt is 50 years old is 5'5, brown short hair weights 120lbs and has bra size 34B. my moms name is Marie and my aunts name is Ann, both never had a fight.
thx man!!!!

[wquk143]

Hi dirky
Love your writing.
Husband wife
He 5.6 brown hair 175lbs so so build
Wrestlings boots black patent with white.
Heel wrestler
She 5.5 130lbs
good build
Wrestling boots Pink patent with black.
Dirty wrestler uses mask same color
Do it up
Thanks
Mike

[DJBrett]

Excellent stories to start off with here, Dirky. I especially like the outside interference elements! I do have a couple of criticisms and suggestions:

1. I was a little confused when you said there were no rules, but then you had the tag rules enforced in the tag fight. No biggie, but maybe you should explain how the tag rules work and what (if any) limitations there are on the outside interference.

2. Similarly, I think you switched the two twins somewhere toward the end of the twin fight--one moment Nicole is cuffed, the next moment she's beating on Lauren. I'm just saying, proofread a little more carefully. That goes for spelling, too.

3. I can see you like the big moment of destruction, where the bones break and such. Nothing wrong with that, but I'm more into the fight itself and the setup to the big moment, where one fighter is defenseless before another. Not sure what exactly my suggestion is, here, other than maybe to vary it up more. Just giving you thoughts on what I like.

4. As I've said in other threads here, I dig unfair fights. So my suggestions for future fights would be along these lines: how about, say, two siblings fight, and the loser has to face two people at once in his/her next fight? How about a fight where one fighter has one hand tied behind his/her back? A young child in the family going up against a much larger older sibling or parent?

Again, I'm only offering these suggestions because overall I really enjoyed your work, especially the Bloems story, so I'm hoping they'll help you to do more. Thanks!

[helloimmred]

my advise to you would be to enjoy the free story, and if you don't like it, don't read any more written by me. [img]smile.gif[/img]

[Chaoswolf9]

Wife 29, 5'7", 145 lbs, 38DD chest, Short blonde/brown hair, with a Healthy figure curves and everything.
Female Friend 21, 5'2", about 110 lbs, C or D chest, long blonde hair. Thin and slender

Awesome stories so far ^_^